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An Oath to the Tribe
By Riven Waker
"Mirrored Eyes as Night Will Arise"
I dedicate my heart
To the blackest dark art
Praising the evil Gods' names
Rapt
before Hells' mighty flames
Heathen child bathed in moonlight
Benedicted in the blessings of lunacy
Hunters' eyes in the shine
of starlight
Darken as the bloodlust heightens ever more
Violet
blood courses through chill immortal flesh
Dedicated to eradicate
the hypocrites of so-called good
By my heart's blood I avow the ascendancy
of nights' creations
The new and final dark age looms like eyes glowing
neath shadow of hood
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Copyright 2010 Riven Waker
Published on Tuesday, April 6, 2010.
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Comments on "An Oath to the Tribe"
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A former member wrote:
I love how you take everything to a dark place. I can only really write from immense pain, people criticize it but...the most profound feelings ARE dark and painful.
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A former member wrote:
I like the imagery... a very strong voice bespeaks the dawning age of renewed darkness.... a worthy oath and pledge indeed. There may be some adjustment needed in the line: "Violet blood coarses through chill immortal flesh"... maybe. The Three will review and contact you with our collective decision. Thank you for sharing your vision, may that which cannot be brought to light forever call to you.
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On Wednesday, April 7, 2010, Riven Waker
(323)
wrote:
Please suggest to me as to how I might alter the line you've mentioned...
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A former member wrote:
the darkness burns brighter with each line...great write!
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On Wednesday, April 7, 2010, ubiquitoussoul
(346) wrote:
The void where was once my heart is now empty sinking into the infinite depths of hell..look straight through my eyes..I swallow souls..I am heartless..The night is the black in my eyes..Beauty has no significance..I creep in the shallows of death..he cries in my bloody breath....Anyway nice write..-soul-
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On Tuesday, April 6, 2010, HeadpatSlut
(259) wrote:
I like your diction here, thanks for the write.
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On Tuesday, April 6, 2010, ANGELSLAYER
(118) wrote:
Count me in on the rise of the final dark age. Nice dark imagery, I think I maight have a nightmare or two
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