The Ilumination
By Malcholm Dark
We
are made of circuitry, a progression of thought
We are easily obtained,
therefor, we can be bought.
Turn us on, then push our buttons of
determination
And learn to think from the masters of information.
Climb aboard and ride us like a thought commuter
We shall think
for you--we the personal computer.
Spend all of your time transfixed
in an addicted stare
Welcome to our world... This your electronic
nightmare!
--We are all knowing, the omnipotent ones
a
creation of man, his prodigal sons.
--We are not crystal-balls using
magic or hallucination
and contrary to what you might know, we are
illumination!
The dominance of our kind will soon unfold
And our laws will be for mankind to uphold.
We are not a dream
or a mass hallucination
But a creation of control...
behold the illumination!
Awards
Comments on "The Ilumination"
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A former member wrote:
First step to being a free man is a free mind. The infowar shall be won
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On Thursday, March 18, 2010, Wiccad
(125) wrote:
What more can I possibly say.............I'm not worthy(picture bowing before you):)
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A former member wrote:
Wow, excellent write. Great thought process. Nice. =)
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On Monday, March 15, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(810) wrote:
Thank-you all... This is one of my less serious pieces... Terminator-esk.. I can't get the circuitry/robot thing out of my head... I need to write it out, so you'll see a few of these... Thanks again.
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On Monday, March 15, 2010, ubiquitoussoul
(346) wrote:
Excellent Write.Felt lyrical to me as I can easily follow the rhyme and flow.Thanks
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On Sunday, March 14, 2010, Riven Waker
(323) wrote:
every line in this piece is quite potent - over all a powerful expression of augury - charged with the power of an exotic truth - brilliant execution
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On Sunday, March 14, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
Another great write, and it made me realize something, I shouldn't yell at my computer anymore lol, thanks for another masterpiece.
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On Sunday, March 14, 2010, keltruth7
(18) wrote:
i really enjoyed this! "welcome to our world this is your electronic nightmare". really stood out to me.
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On Tuesday, March 16, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(810) wrote:
Thanks... I watch too many Terminator type movies. But you hit on it, how we stare into our computers....