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Why no current pictures?
By Musik2MyEyes
What do you see?
Distortion
Mutilation
Not a
creation
Of nature
Was I ever not
The magnet of stares
Wasn't I once
The gentle butterflies in the womb
My current
temple
Man-made
Like a construction site
Pounding...ripping...tearing...crushing
Destruction
He was weilding
A long handled lighter like
a saber
Melting the flesh
Watching hair melt and disappear
Or so I'm guessing
I wasn't concious then
Exposure
Like a car wreck
Slowing down to look
Curious
Quick calculations
On what may have happened
Human nature
How can I be offended
Self destruction
To complete the incomplete task
Epic
failure
Made things worse
How can that possibly be so
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Copyright 2010 Musik2MyEyes
Published on Thursday, February 25, 2010.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
Someone asked....Comments on "Why no current pictures?"
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful descriptions of the uglier side of life. I enjoyed reading it.
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On Saturday, February 27, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(872)
wrote:
And to think this incredible write, started from one question. I enjoyed this one very much.
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A former member wrote:
what do we see when we look at the surface? who seeks to dwell there..... like some lily pad floating upon the pacific, ridin' waves like there were no shore.... looking up as if there were no down.... looking back as if there were no tomorrow. how could that be?
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A former member wrote:
There is more here than you are saying. It is deeper than we get to see. YOUR meaning is a beautiful representation of the lovely words you just gave. Sadness throughout, but a great write indeed. =)
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A former member wrote:
Quite a deep response for a simple question. But then again, what is a simple answer? Bravo
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A former member wrote:
Chilling, for sure.
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On Thursday, February 25, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(810) wrote:
Wow, that was great. Fine visual imagery and pefect flow. Your writting, and wording, impeccable. Thanks.
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