Farest Well

By dark_sister

A last sadness,
before the curtain closes.
A last spinning velvet kiss.
Everyone,
apologies,
but I believe,
the beauty ends here.
I'm taking a pill that shall make me common.
It's called acceptance.
Rage against it, children,
though it may be the death of you.
I simply love life too much
to let people be the death of me.

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Copyright 2003 dark_sister
Published on Monday, May 26, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Sunday, November 4, 2007, carlosjackal (3015)By person wrote:

    Poised, sharp and on-message in the clearest, concisest manner. Bloody brillint :) -Carl

  • carlosjackal On Sunday, November 4, 2007, carlosjackal (3015)By person wrote:

    *brilliant..bloomin' spelling!

  • Dissolving Poet On Friday, May 26, 2006, Dissolving Poet (564)By person wrote:

    This was just fantastic I loved how it ended, and how you have a mind of your own and you won't let no one running you into the ground go !

  • urbanhumility On Saturday, November 8, 2003, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    one of the manny wise things you say, concise and beautiful....urban

  • DoctorAsh On Tuesday, May 27, 2003, DoctorAsh (373)By person wrote:

    yaaa!!!! .. this kicks ass . you be you, i'll be me .. scream it into their ears .. awsome write. D&A

  • Midnight Phoenix On Monday, May 26, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (240)By person wrote:

    I don't quite know if I grasp the absolute meaning behind this piece. After applying my own, I find this to be a lovely write.

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