impolitely.everafter
By sIo
shatter me likes a bulls eye
arrow up and tipped down
we both
know this hunt was
for blood
counting on the favorless
flavorless taste of revenge
burning our tongues like
peppered
down disgust
you only spoke like you knew
the secret words
to this
cave, even Aladdin won't
rub is genie down for a
taste
mounting tigers and shooting up
stars we're like
animals in this
ruined tavern
drink up darling for the
nights
still young, and i'm ready to bounce
when you're full
of liquored up noise
and bandaged heartache
prose like
no other ingenius
disguise faking portraits of life
like you
meant to be wise
no russian roulette could save your
blacked
out intrigue, the infatuation of
love from a pony, to a steed.
baby, i won't call you that.
because it hurts like this
hell
the zest of this anticipation rocks
this gate keepers boat
where the grim ripper tore down
our great wall of china
take me back to the days
and i'll kiss you happier there.
make me memorize the face
of til kingdom come
we're a shot
glass away
from forever after.
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Comments on "impolitely.everafter"
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On Saturday, January 7, 2017, SolApathy
(667) wrote:
So much emotion in this piece...I'll take a shot of that.
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On Friday, February 19, 2010, heroineyes
(113) wrote:
mounting tigers and shooting up stars we're like animals in this ruined tavern sweet imagery...
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A former member wrote:
Whoa, this is a hail storm of pikes and knives. But it also forebodes a semi calm after the storm, on of ruin and dismay. Very inspiring. +tpu+
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A former member wrote:
one of*
:P
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On Wednesday, February 17, 2010, RubyXero
(484) wrote:
interesting read. nice ending.
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A former member wrote:
This poem made me feel sexy.--Draven
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On Tuesday, February 16, 2010, Rebel tiGer King
(258) wrote:
and i read as if it were fragments of things to come, held together by the reality that is and the things that passed behind the base of things, something of a tapered vision of the fog weakening, and finally being able to sleep because reality is now better than my dreams -symph-