And i'll kiss you

By Rebel tiGer King

Just like that,
you take your fingertips
and trace my lips,
as you lick yours
You want them pressed on yours
And i feel your pulse
Raining on us
falling like the hair down your fcae
but i move it
as i put my hands
on your cheeks and caress
Looking into your eyes
I delete the distance between your lips and mine
now slowly
And i make your blood boil like
lava when i kiss you
We close our eyes
And baby,
We cant even imagine
the heaven we create together
But we love it
And i'll kiss you
just like this.

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Copyright 2010 Rebell tiGer King
Published on Sunday, February 7, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Killerdemonchick On Thursday, November 29, 2012, Killerdemonchick (54)By person wrote:

    Great write I like this so much passion and feeling.

  • JadedHeart On Saturday, March 24, 2012, JadedHeart (18)By person wrote:

    I can really feel the emotion behind this poem. great piece!!

  • A former member wrote: this is very..interesting. caught my attention.. you're good at writing..i enjoyed this

  • Leith Plunkett On Tuesday, February 9, 2010, Leith Plunkett (239)By person wrote:

    A beautiful piece. Very intense. "Just like that" very powerful in all that is felt, not written. Well captured

  • A former member wrote: This is quite intense work. I hope I have something like this someday.

  • A former member wrote: oh wow.... if this is love then I should not have known it, you are amazing.

  • urbanhumility On Monday, February 8, 2010, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    beautiful......

  • A former member wrote: This was amazing. Very simple but still able to perfectly describe love. I know what this feels like and, unfortunately, I know what it feels like to lose it as well. Hold on to what you have, beacuse it is beautiful.


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