Baby, I've fallen...

By Rebel tiGer King

Baby,
I've fallen for you.
Your voice trancends
one thousand clouds
beneath my feet.
And still your smile
anchors my heart to
your soul.

Baby,
I've fallen for you.
You've become a part
of my skie.
Kissing the stars above the
heavens of my
otherwise  meaningless existance.

Baby,
I've been dying...


To tell you,
Your smile
begins my day.

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Copyright 2010 Rebell tiGer King
Published on Tuesday, January 26, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Any woman you write for is lucky indeed. Amazing write. *Alice*

  • sIo On Wednesday, January 27, 2010, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    this is beautiful *snuggles*

  • A former member wrote: Beautifully concluded. Though, it doesn't seem much like an ending... this poem lingers on in the most delicate and prosperous of ways. I am so glad that you're smiling again, and I do so hope that it continues. Much love.

  • Narcissa On Tuesday, January 26, 2010, Narcissa (404)By person wrote:

    Your sweet words always brings smiles ;)...someone making you smile lately??? good to hear.

  • A former member wrote: I bet you do say that to all the ladies.... lucky ladies! Beautiful write my dear. Should second stanza say "skin"? *hugs* =)

  • Rebel tiGer King On Tuesday, January 26, 2010, Rebel tiGer King (258)By person wrote:

    its correct dear, sky but spelled skie -symph-

  • A former member wrote: I bet you say that to ALL the ladies, huh?. J/K, man I really like this one.--Draven

  • A former member wrote: hahaha willy. i sense a fight coming between the girls.....*hides* this is beautiful though, lucky girl she is. *slightly jealous*~moony


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