The Lorner

By theXkevorkian

The Lorner




mind is reeling
my thoughts so revealing
unable to describe all the mess
so I'll keep it short
and try not to distort
the perception I am trying to grasp
some blood thirsty and violent
I'm plotting against the government
yes . I am subversive if you might ask
what has taken over me
the thoughts I cannot see
all the bullshit from my past
so that's me in my corner
some say just a lorner
cowering from all the shame
so I relinquish moreover
why won't you come over
and whisper to me my name

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Copyright 2010 theXkevorkian
Published on Thursday, January 7, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

definition LORNER ; Meaning a person originating from Lorne, New Brunswick Canada. It is a well known fact that you don't mess with Lorner's. Lorner's have dealt with lots of crap and stereotyping in their lives and have kicked a lot of asses as a r
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  • A former member wrote: Raw. I like it. =]

  • A former member wrote: I feel this. Great job. *Alice*

  • Rebel tiGer King On Thursday, January 7, 2010, Rebel tiGer King (258)By person wrote:

    pretty intense, with maybe some threats to our government? always interesting to read raw poetry -symph-

  • Dilated View On Thursday, January 7, 2010, Dilated View (583)By person wrote:

    Last two lines I read like a raised eyebrow challenge. Come see what happens. Interesting read man.

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