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Tornado
By theXkevorkian
Tornado
Stare into tornado like swirls of celestial elegance
Blood churning swirls of grassey greens and sprinkle trees
So gentle
and euphoric the mind rape of LSD
So lost are the changing children
With hands beneath their wings
having the temper of my childhood
still wanting to be free
making mess amongst the forgotten
the
oilmans tyranny unleashed
you paid the price , said not to intice
you've got the world beneath your feet
so as I walk through the
parlents of misery
A disinfranchised shell of a man
when I have
left my cowering corner
The feeling enticing me again ..
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Copyright 2010 theXkevorkian
Published on Tuesday, January 5, 2010.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "Tornado"
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A former member wrote:
I loved this. I don't even know what to say about it, except that it was amazing. Write on. =]
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On Wednesday, January 6, 2010, Rebel tiGer King
(258)
wrote:
this is good, i liked the write, keep it up -rtk-
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On Tuesday, January 5, 2010, Dilated View
(583) wrote:
This was vivid and painted a very strange landscape in my mind. Really enjoyed it, will have to chew on it a bit to see what it means to me. Interesting read.
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A former member wrote:
Killer first line dude, much like tornadic winds this poem pulled me in and then tore me to shreds... :) Good write man
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