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Awakenings
By theXkevorkian
Awakenings :
Solemnly I appear into a world of no understanding
Drifting along , as if on a feather riding the wake of a disturbance
Never understanding the way they think
Never knowing the touch of
another being
Left behind in the awakening
But I must
go on
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Copyright 2010 theXkevorkian
Published on Saturday, January 2, 2010.
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On Sunday, May 9, 2010, Dei
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wrote:
i like this, this drifts across the page like a leaf drifts across breezes.
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A former member wrote:
I loved this one... Bravo
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A former member wrote:
So much was said with so little. This is beautiful. *Alice*
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A former member wrote:
Such despair brought out in so few words :) ice write man.
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A former member wrote:
this is very good. i love the was it flows, and the sharp ending. and thank you for your welcome, and for checking out my work
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A former member wrote:
Are you sure we don't have the same brain!? Very good write! =]
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A former member wrote:
thats some heavy stuff dude. god the world can be cruel and misunderstanding.
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On Sunday, January 3, 2010, Deaths Apostle
(65) wrote:
Wow...I know this feeling really well as of late
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A former member wrote:
Nice imagery. Lost feelings brought out and the want to still go on. Well done. =)
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On Saturday, January 2, 2010, Dilated View
(583) wrote:
I know these feelings well. Very nicely put and welcome :)
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