The Universe In Her Eyes

By Riven Waker

I swear I saw the universe in her eyes
That's where I saw myself
As a star system in her deep violent skies
I'll never forget her very last breath
When she whispered - "deja vu"
Thought I swear I saw the universe in her eyes


{She was a hummingbird of my minds' design
Forgotten line
Would she now sip of the fading violet gourde
As the phantom huntsmen bemused walk away}

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Copyright 2009 Riven Waker
Published on Saturday, December 5, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: amazing. i loved the flow of the words.

  • A former member wrote: you had me at the title.I enjoyed this one thoroughly.thanx

  • A former member wrote: ahhh, so beautifully and romantically expressed, immaculate.. a moment of pure perfection.

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