overdose d iscrepancies of shock:treatment
By sIo
(requested repost)
one hundred
different ways to tell you that i tried
as i lined myself with burning
flesh
stripping my stomach like ammonia soaked wallpaper walls
waiting for the stench of the fumes to take me down
yet with the
evidence that i was alive i took myself down
foamless and regurgitating
the events that took place
nothing made it all go away
it all
just came c r a s h i n g
down
the silence was
what killed…
my sentencing, my punishment, my pain
all
for me and my straightjacket mind
a gurney for the stretch of time
it took to realize…
if i wanted to die before, now i could
only plead with death
bribery that would simply take my body
so my soul could linger and wail
imagine if you can, an
institute of decay
more alive than the floors and wood mattresses
but mimicking the attempt at a cancerous state
pulling together
and feeding off each other
building to consume and wipe out
with the strategic ways of a dust bunny
4 a.m.
vital signs
the screeching, screaming
the yelling,
howling
twenty-four hour suicide watch
banging and thumping
because the lights are too bright
and it’s stabbing at your
nerves like a coat hanger
s c r a t c h i n g
like
flies and needles
in my sanctuary of plastic pillows and
hospital blankets
hidden eyes and forget-me-nots
because in
there all i could do was remember
tracing the purple veins on my
arms
where they’re collapsed and bruised
into a cloudy
storm of sensitivity and puke green splotches
from then on i held
my arms to myself
it was safer that way
in fact if
i’d had it my way
i’d have sat in my room bound to
a chair for hours
but i had to hear every little thing…
the stories
the drugs
the gangbangs
the cutters,
oh god the cutters
shifty eyed and routinely walking
homicidal,
suicidal, nymphomaniacs
so when the toilets broke
no one asked
who did it
they just picked up the pieces and
sliced
lockdown for two days
and you won’t believe how
long a minute can feel
when you don’t even know when it’s
passed
blank walls and barred windows
air may as well have
been our marijuana
we just wanted to inhale it all whenever we could
get it
if we could get it
in single file lines, off
unit restriction
on level three
in a clogged shower with mildew
stains
lice infested roommates and bipolar patients
abusive
staff and rough nurses
ignorant doctors and a shot glass of soap
if i’d known as i watched the filthy water slide in circles
down the spider eyed drain at the center of my cubical ecstasy
that in one hundred ways i had fucked up
in one hundred minutes
i was already damaged
in the blink of an eye i had just begun…
inside myself we could play house
and i’d be the
mommy
i’d smile and take care of you
outside
of myself we could play doctor
and i’d be the patient.
but i’m afraid doc
that i’m too eager to die
so let me smile and take care of you
and i’ll keep my hands
from myself
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Comments on "overdose d iscrepancies of shock:treatment"
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On Wednesday, November 8, 2017, Cassette
(1144) wrote:
yes, haunting is the right word, I think.
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On Friday, January 6, 2017, LordColdwater
(31) wrote:
This is indescribably terrifying. The waking nightmare of dispassionate institutionalized "care." The water in my veins, the carbon in my bones, I'm weeping right down to my chromosomes.
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On Friday, May 25, 2012, OLd SouL
(734) wrote:
feel uncomfortable reading this.. not that its suppose to be comfortable.. not at all.. but more uncomfortable because you were in a place or state of mind to write this. makes me want to build a new landscape for your mind to wander through, full of eye candy and reassuring beings.
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A former member wrote:
it tore at my brain it made me believe in the feeling i felt the flow as if i was apart of it this really brought it self out and made me think i really love this, this is a very great poem thank you
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On Tuesday, November 17, 2009, Spiritus_Frumenti
(341) wrote:
fuck i love this. it was so touching and flawless in its delivery. this poem could have gone for hours and it wouldn't matter. "the silence was what killed..." just fucking amazing...-l-
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A former member wrote:
Definitely a real expose on the harsh realities of life in a harsh place with your life left in harsh hands. Great write!