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Honey.Bee
By Sin
Such a clever little creature
Flitting about in your striped dress
And pointy shoes, what sweetness
Hides your anger, as the world tilts
Around your buzz and pollinated lips
I just wish
Your tongue came with less of a sting
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© 2009 Sin
Published on Friday, May 22, 2009.
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A former member wrote:
Not too much. Just enough. Nice tease.
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On Friday, May 3, 2013, carlosjackal
(3014)
wrote:
Still a wonderful classic..Richly deserved Poem Of The Day and fits this May weather perfectly :)
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A former member wrote:
very nice. i enjoyed reading you poem
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A former member wrote:
Hmm, interesting work. Left me pondering the true meaning behind your words, but had no issue with painting a mental image for me
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On Monday, June 22, 2009, unspeakable truth
(100) wrote:
Wonderful write, I really enjoyed this...
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A former member wrote:
i love this. great play o words.
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On Sunday, May 24, 2009, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
Awww I love this, so simple yet so intense. I enjoy every piece of you...and your writing.
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On Sunday, May 24, 2009, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
ah this is so not how i was thinking it would be from the title and from you... that said, light and yet hard at the same time, it causes a knowing grin and a long sigh.... you rock babe
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On Sunday, May 24, 2009, carlosjackal
(3014) wrote:
Actually saw a bee in the park collecting pollen from a flower the day you posted this...Brilliant write. *leaves rampant rabbits*
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A former member wrote:
clever, clever -if i'm guessing correctly =D Either way, it's a very well crafted piece. so glad youre posting again :)
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A former member wrote:
Well said.
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On Friday, May 22, 2009, The Lipstick Factor
(290) wrote:
Delightful little piece. Having been stung yesterday--seems judicious timing to read about the little critters. Well done.
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On Friday, May 22, 2009, Sketso
(435) wrote:
THIS... I can relate to. Friggin' sting. Nicely written, easy to read, yet still quite a bit to ponder.
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On Friday, May 22, 2009, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
This is a sweet little ode, with big smarts. I keep wondering what it's about, really. Cute, serious toward the end. Fun read, darlin. You awake now? :)
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A former member wrote:
Sweet poem!
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