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you're the poem I erased
By freudian-slip
I need not waste this space...
it is almost as precious to me as the moments that passed
when
simultaneously
I became your savior
and you became my saint
yet how quickly we erased
all our greatest intentions
geared in the direction of we
masturbation aligned so quickly with complacency
blame ridden
with all the past emotions
minus the girl jumping out of the cake
jesus
fuck
I miss you so much I can hear my heart break
(forgive my simplicity here)
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© 2009 freudian-slip
Published on Tuesday, May 12, 2009.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "you're the poem I erased"
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On Wednesday, May 27, 2009, Sketso
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wrote:
ya know... I refrain from commenting on this every time I read it, if only just because... it hurts. simplistic, perhaps. beautiful, yes.
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On Monday, June 22, 2009, Sketso
(435) wrote:
*refrains again*
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A former member wrote:
if only we could delete heartbreak as fast as our words.
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On Monday, June 22, 2009, Malice In Wonderland
(987) wrote:
agreed.
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On Wednesday, May 13, 2009, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
Never apologize for you poetry! Well unless it's that 3lined, over formatted,too many numbers and fbombs, trying to sound wise shit. But this...deserves not apology! It's enjoyable. It's like witness a heartbreak without the background music. I'm happy to have read this.
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On Tuesday, May 12, 2009, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
Tragic, and spoken well. I think we all have felt this before, and you put it into a work of words. Lovely.
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