the truth

By BrokenAngel

the only truth in life is...
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that no matter how nice you are
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no matter how many friends you have
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no matter how long your relationships last
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you are really alone with nobody who cares for you
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you think your so called 'friends' will always be there?
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you really believe that they are loyal to you
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that they wont completely abandon you
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to handle their insignificant issues
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they see that you are drowning
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because this world we live in
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full of self centered people
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is synonymous to hell
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we are forsaken
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in isolation
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forgotten
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alone
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we are alone.

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© 2009 BrokenAngel
Published on Thursday, May 7, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Scarrzz On Thursday, September 30, 2010, Scarrzz (238)By person wrote:

    You just made my Favorites list. That is so plainly true and devastating, it hurts to read it. I do believe that shared true love is the only exception to this, and perhaps the love of a good parent, but other than those exceptions, there is no one else that I can see. Thanks for the insight. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: ha wow this is pretty creative. Scholar

  • Riven Waker On Friday, May 8, 2009, Riven Waker (323)By person wrote:

    this piece stings because it has the ring of truth to it

  • Echoes of Orpheus On Thursday, May 7, 2009, Echoes of Orpheus (359)By person wrote:

    The truth in 99.9 % of cases, likely. There's a friend and a lover that will fit in the .1, if you don't give up. *sends a hug*

  • Winter Born On Thursday, May 7, 2009, Winter Born (169)By person wrote:

    That is A truth all right. One I tend to believe most of the time...

  • A former member wrote: ....an example of why I have very few friends and trust no one....

  • mysticventures On Thursday, May 7, 2009, mysticventures (538)By person wrote:

    the truth hurts

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