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The Orb of Blood
By Riven Waker
It was a neural climax
I stepped out into the night
I was intended
and designed to be
Something more... more than human
The room
had swam with the constant
The multiverse suspended in space
Was
my web and its denizens
All my prey - I stood there
In the night
but never...
Alighted in its air
Igniting
Upon its
dark sky
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Published on Saturday, May 2, 2009.
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"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
Great Work
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On Friday, January 8, 2010, Dilated View
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wrote:
I thought the structure was very interesting the upper section looked very orb-like. Once again you paint such an immense amount of imagery with each line. Much enjoyed :)
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A former member wrote:
there is an eerie quality to your writes that I look forward to...always that apocalyptical sense of foreboding.this piece was no exception.I love the hesitation at the end. hell, even the lines themselves form an orb-like shape; just need the red font for good measure ;)
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On Friday, November 27, 2009, Riven Waker
(323) wrote:
as soon as i figure out the editor lol
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On Thursday, May 7, 2009, IAmNorge
(39) wrote:
this is good, i like the line, "alighted in it's air" it makes you wounder what the whole has been talking of. anyway good write
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