You said...

By Aurora_Light

You said you'd never leave me,
That you'd never go away.
You said you'd always be here,
That you'd always stay.
You said you'd lead me through the forest,
On those dark and lonely nights.
You said I was your lighthouse,
In those dreaded and stormy days.
You said I was your angel,
That kept you in the right.
You said a lot of things,
Especially on those nights.
But you up and left me,
You left without a word.
I had no one to lead me,
On those dark and lonely night.
I had no light to guide me,
To a harbor safe and sound.
But I guess you could be my angel,
Up in heaven were you sit.
Please dear cousin remember me,
And never let me quite.

Written in memory of Kurt Reitter, killed June 2000.

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Copyright 2003 Amanda L. Mrozinski
Published on Friday, May 16, 2003.     Filed under: "Tribute" and "Poetry"
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  • Beautiful Scars On Monday, May 31, 2004, Beautiful Scars (200)By person wrote:

    wow, this is so sad. :( ..::Rage::...

  • A former member wrote: Very lovely. If it wasnt about your cousin, I would say it is a good love poem.

  • kaitoudark On Sunday, May 2, 2010, kaitoudark (45)By person wrote:

    thats what i was gona say

  • Abbyernathie On Friday, August 8, 2003, Abbyernathie (61)By person wrote:

    it's always hard to lose a friend, but don't forget that the ones who are still here will always be there for u, just like you would for us!

  • Blinded_Tiger On Thursday, August 7, 2003, Blinded_Tiger (532)By person wrote:

    I read this and then i didnt want to comment. Well now i am here again. The sorrow in this piece is breathtaking, and it realy do reach out to grab me, as i read it. Tiger Love....

  • Blood of Winter On Friday, July 18, 2003, Blood of Winter (300)By person wrote:

    Sometimes without others it seems immpossible to navigate the storm. Just keep moving forward and don't look back there is always someone waiting on the other side, great write.

  • A former member wrote: wow, really, tragic, u r good with emotions,though i fell for your loss, keep it up much -lord sephiroth-

  • Rebel_Angel On Sunday, June 29, 2003, Rebel_Angel (328)By person wrote:

    Just remember you have your friends that are here for you. You have been here for me so many times I owe it to you!

  • A former member wrote: I love the poem..its full of emotion, truely beautiful. I feel sorry for your loss.

  • DoctorAsh On Thursday, May 29, 2003, DoctorAsh (389)By person wrote:

    Ive read this before [but..... hesitated to comment]The reason: unknown: Something pulled me back here though, maybe just to say: That this write is .. alluring & beautiful [D&A]

  • Rachel On Thursday, May 29, 2003, Rachel (268)By person wrote:

    Losing a loved one is hard.. I've been there. Time heals all, though.

  • A former member wrote: i enjoyed it very much ~saint~

  • Midnight Phoenix On Thursday, May 22, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (243)By person wrote:

    So deep and real. A piece of beauty found within a dark and difficult situation. Nice work.

  • Griffin On Monday, May 19, 2003, Griffin (115)By person wrote:

    great poem, but i feel sorry for you

  • The_Scavenger On Saturday, May 17, 2003, The_Scavenger (31)By person wrote:

    its a great poem. I'm glad you finally finished it. dont worry babe we will go to visit the site. I'll find out where it is for you.

  • Six-Out On Saturday, May 17, 2003, Six-Out (1483)By person wrote:

    I know the feeling. all too well.

  • Aurora_Light On Friday, May 16, 2003, Aurora_Light (482)By person wrote:

    my cuz was like a brother and life was a....hell without him to talk to

  • A former member wrote: I love the poem but feel sorry for your lost

  • IceDragoness On Tuesday, May 27, 2003, IceDragoness (201)By person wrote:

    Me too! *Hugs* i'm sorry hun you're the sweetest :( ~Dawn

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