W.W.A.D. ?

By mysticventures



If they seen our culture of violence

and cruelty

and hate


If they seen our culture of indifference

to pollution

to extinction


If they seen our culture of greed

and envy

and sloth


If they seen our culture of intolerance

to freedom

to love


If they seen our culture of gluttony

and abuse

and neglect


If they seen our culture of lies

to truth

to spirit


Yes, I wonder ..... WHAT WOULD ALIENS DO?

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© 2009 mysticventures
Published on Friday, May 1, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • mysticventures On Wednesday, August 18, 2021, mysticventures (538)By person wrote:

    Indeed. No doubt they are laughing. And probably smoking some killer Oregon bud ;)

  • Lil Rorschach On Wednesday, August 18, 2021, Lil Rorschach (183)By person wrote:

    I like how it sounds like its about to be about god or religion and then flips to aliens. I like to think aliens are just stoners and laugh at us from a far

  • Echoes of Orpheus On Thursday, May 7, 2009, Echoes of Orpheus (359)By person wrote:

    conquer the world? It's always been an option I've taken into consideration ;)

  • A former member wrote: I was waiting for the religeous angle on this one. Nicely done, thank you!

  • whisperer On Friday, May 1, 2009, whisperer (166)By person wrote:

    a valid and poignent question my friend, well explained, beautifully and bluntly written. genius prose if i do say so myself

  • A former member wrote: HA! THIS ONES FUCKING AWESOME. Aliens Probably Dont even Know what To Think About us.

  • Sketso On Friday, May 1, 2009, Sketso (435)By person wrote:

    At least it wasn't written with random caps. ;) ;) I too was expecting a political rant, but with the twist, it makes one consider the insanity of humanity instead. Nice!

  • Winter Born On Friday, May 1, 2009, Winter Born (169)By person wrote:

    What a wonderful twist at the end... I was really afraid there was going to be some thinly veiled political message in there. very well done!

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