New Streets at Night
By dark_sister
Walking my new streets at night,
past rich houses with glowing rooms and artwork.
I peer into exposed windows.
Catch sight of a leg reclining.
A tumble of bookshelves.
Eyes peering back at me.
Cats howl in the distance.
Everything is a loudness.
The helicopter,
hundreds of people breathing,
but yet we keep our voices hushed.
So many little lives, so quiet,
pushed close together,
makes a trembling buzz of inner city.
It's realness I can feel in my heart.
A sleepy realness that pulls me from my porch.
I stalk the alleyways.
Pulling strangers in my wake.
Searching for the secret noise
that everyone is afraid of,
that signal sound.
So many little lives, so quiet,
pushed close together,
neighbors all with fearful rabbit noses,
makes my tongue loll,
my senses quicken.
I vibrate with the buzzing of my inner city.
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Comments on "New Streets at Night"
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On Sunday, September 24, 2006, Bluegirl
(177) wrote:
oooh, beautifully written. I am LOVING the imagery in this one. :)
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A former member wrote:
Very atmospheric.I like it very much!
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On Friday, May 16, 2003, Jonas
(720) wrote:
i'm sorry, but you just flat out rule.
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On Thursday, July 3, 2003, Stranger
(264) wrote:
Got to agree with Fish here. "I stalk the alleyways. Pulling strangers in my wake." Your work is amazing line after amazing line.
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On Friday, May 16, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
i absolutely love this..a description of your inner self seen a city...great job.