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but not softly
By disposable
hold me
but not softly
squeeze me with arms
that aren't a lie
until i'm mere bones
rattling in your chest
kiss me
but not softly
press those lips so close to mine
that promise of a new day exists
and then meet me in my eyes
touch me
but not softly
burn your fingerprints
into my flesh
until the flames of hell
seem a welcoming breeze
lie with me
but not softly
consume me whole
eat my moon
and swallow my stars if u wish
just love me hard
hard-
but please...
do not do it softly
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A former member wrote:
In a word: delicious. This is the kind of poem that sends shivers down my spine. I wish I could bookmark this already!
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On Saturday, December 15, 2012, M Morgan
(198)
wrote:
Oh yeah! Not softly but hard and with strenght that is so good. Fantastic and i love it.
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A former member wrote:
yesssssssssss!
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On Saturday, December 15, 2012, Stephanie Sideways
(276) wrote:
Desire and lust expressed incredibly cleverly. This piece is unusual, unique and makes you want to read it several times.... ( and I did)
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On Saturday, December 15, 2012, PoetessDarkly
(700) wrote:
wow, totally awed by this masterpiece.
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On Saturday, November 7, 2009, Qurious
(40) wrote:
I'm totally with ebonyamore on this one. Awesome.
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On Sunday, April 19, 2009, ebonyamore
(101) wrote:
my god but that's sexy. and i so know those feelings but the way you phrased them...*shivers* heeellll yes. more please...
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On Sunday, April 19, 2009, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
"consume me whole / eat my moon / and swallow my stars if u wish" I don't think I've ever read anything like that bit. Very unique, and quite beautiful. Write it harder, daddy. Cool stuff.
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A former member wrote:
hard enough to FEEL it...yes.
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On Sunday, April 19, 2009, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
rapturous. i dig it. dig it ...deeply
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