Log In
The Swan
By mysticventures
The Swan swam silently southward
serenely
solemnly
searching
sedulously
In hope that
somewhere
someplace
someday
sorrow
Will fade with the call of a distant love
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
Ask the author first.
© 2009 mysticventures
Published on Thursday, April 16, 2009.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "The Swan"
Log in to post comments.
-
On Monday, April 20, 2009, Fantecstasy
(122)
wrote:
Capital, and intoxicating. It was a pleasure to be able to read this. *tips hat*
-
On Thursday, April 16, 2009, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
you know Lylani - I must admit the 'form' of this piece was left to cosmic chance - though I'll be the first to admit it worked wonderfully :)
-
On Thursday, April 16, 2009, Lylani
(116) wrote:
I find the form of this very seductive, And the write itself simplistic beauty, very well done
-
On Thursday, April 16, 2009, Leith Plunkett
(239) wrote:
Yes the form, accidental or not. Turn your head on the side and it resembles a swan in flight. I also hear voices LOL. The simplicity adds so much more for the reader to ponder on. Well captured.
-
On Thursday, April 16, 2009, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
thank you for your honest comment Jonas :)
-
On Thursday, April 16, 2009, Jonas
(720) wrote:
y'know... i just got done "chatting" with you on the chatterbox and although i've decided rather quickly that i don't much like you i do have to say that your poetry is pretty good. i like the simplicity with which you deliver more complicated raw ideas.
-
On Thursday, April 16, 2009, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
I can relate to this Swan. It seems this is just what one must do, flow south where it is warmer sometimes,and persevere simply to hear the one missed very much. Beautiful piece this is.
mysticventures's Latest Works Feed
Join