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A Sperms Life
By mysticventures
" Swimmers take your mark "
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" Ready "
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BANG !!!
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" And they're off "
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© 2009 mysticventures
Published on Thursday, April 16, 2009.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
When I read the title, then the rest all I could think was "Premature..?". All in all, love it. Simply cute, in my weird thoughts.
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On Tuesday, April 28, 2009, CjPsychotic
(30)
wrote:
All I can hear in my mind is Dori saying: "just keep swimming, just keep swimming". Funny.
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On Thursday, April 16, 2009, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...I always attributed it toward more of a Lost Ark episode, where thousands race to the treasure through a dark cave filled with many dead ends and cruel traps, all on limited food and water; those lucky enough to make it to the treasure before starving or getting killed (if any even make it) fight to the death, and the sole survivor wins...
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On Thursday, April 16, 2009, elisa
(1616) wrote:
...bring the axe.
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On Thursday, April 16, 2009, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
:)~
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On Thursday, April 16, 2009, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
Giggity!
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On Thursday, April 16, 2009, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
lol - I was gonna include a line about 'swimming aimlessly in the bellybutton sea' but decided to leave that visual to your own imagination :)
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On Thursday, April 16, 2009, Sin
(1168) wrote:
lmao..thank you for this gem and the laughter..teehee bellybutton sea, youre too much
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On Thursday, April 16, 2009, Sin
(1168) wrote:
almost makes you feel sorry for the lil fellas ;)
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A former member wrote:
splat! we have a winner...
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