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By sixsixnine
Can you feel yourself,
in the current of the night?
When it rains catastrophy,
is it for you and I?
Is it making us dream,
of rainbow slides on soft clouds?
It is raining catastrophy,
all around, now must we see?
You are the current of the night & light;
Creator of wrong and right.
I am the current of the dark & bright;
Creator drifting in , around , through & with you.
Do you want to explore more here?
Go ahead.
It is your head,
soon to be dead,
though your soul
so uncontrollable.
Death
Fear
Cry
Try
Lie
Life
Smile
Rest
Honest
Love
War
Hate
Peace
Rage
Wish
Trust
Suck
Fuck
come on
Nothing is really true...
See nothing is me & you...
Find and feel yourself...
Love every emotion
on your way to Hell...
We all want what we desire,
but will we retrieve it from the fire?
I am wrong
Can you feel me?
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© 2009 sixsixnine matthew parkey II
Published on Thursday, April 2, 2009.
Filed under:
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On Wednesday, April 29, 2009, ALBATROSS
(197)
wrote:
"I am the current of the dark & bright" and "We all want what we desire, but will we retrieve it from the fire?" These lines are pure genius. I love it!
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On Thursday, April 16, 2009, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
the harsh truth in one's own mind can be tough to grasp - you have done well with this one - i like it :)
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On Friday, April 10, 2009, ebonyamore
(101) wrote:
Oh GOD....the question of my life. staring at me and mocking me. "we all want what we desire but will we retrieve it from the fire?" soooo many desires and so many fires to contemplate...is the prize worth the price? is the yearning more painful than the inevitable burning? GOD! That line smacked me upside the head and my ears are still ringing. fucking brilliant!
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On Saturday, April 4, 2009, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
Thanks
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A former member wrote:
Evoke you do,..the dissolusion of paridgm shift,...when illusion sets in your left with mental anarchy,..i like alot.
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On Thursday, April 2, 2009, Sketso
(435) wrote:
2 lines from this write will stick with me for quite a long while... "We all want what we desire, but will we retrieve it from the fire?" Blunt wisdom impact... HEAD SHOT!
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On Thursday, April 2, 2009, whisperer
(166) wrote:
i liked the single word slide, like falling on lubed razors
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On Thursday, April 2, 2009, blue
(1454) wrote:
Ha, just as good the second time. Fine writing here. ~b
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On Thursday, April 2, 2009, blue
(1454) wrote:
Wrong? Quite right. "Is it making us dream, of rainbow slides on soft clouds?" Loved that line above all here written. Especially too the lanslide of verbalized emotions ending in such a provocative and literally poignant question: "We all want what we desire, but will we retrieve it from the fire?" These cut to the bone perspectives may be what we all need these days. This was truly enjoyed, thank you. ~b
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On Thursday, April 2, 2009, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
Thank you Blue.
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