Like Dead Rivers

By Lady Grinning Soul

They
ache to be released
{and beg to be
erased.}

The words that
hardly flow
coherently.

I wish I could
sketch portraits of
butterflies
and string together
melodies written
in black ink.

I cant
scream
melodies anymore,
my voice is going hoarse
from repeated failures.

They run bone dry
like
dead rivers.

The words,
splatter
upon the wrinkled canvas
and stare blankly
at the wall
as I
try to scratch the paint away.

Smearing mistakes
onto my fingers
and all over my
pretty white dress.

And they ache.

The words.

They beg
to be released.

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© 2009 Gold Dust Woman
Published on Wednesday, March 4, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: the title made me think of veins...which is where poetry comes from, methinks...rock on, gold dust woman :)

  • The Lipstick Factor On Thursday, March 5, 2009, The Lipstick Factor (290)By person wrote:

    The paradox of writers block--seems some of the best poetry is about not being able to write. Absolutely love the last 4 stanzas--could stand on their own. Excellence.

  • Lady Grinning Soul On Thursday, March 5, 2009, Lady Grinning Soul (145)By person wrote:

    you think they could? hmm.... never really thought of that...... and your right bout some of the best poetry being about not being able to write poetry.

  • A former member wrote: Very good.

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