obscure series notch #2 where has my halloween got too?

By whisperer

lie forgotten just inside the fence, hair a mess of leaves and rain and the sun breaks gently through iron grey clouds

sitting up to rub the cold water out of my bloodshot eyes at all the masks running past my waist high fence...


blue and green, and brown eyes leer at me over paper and plastic smiles...
hard lined horror holes eyeing me in trepidation from behind pictuesque depictions of horror and transfixed images of suffering or abysmal happiness

things that were never taken from the shelves of some SuperMart
or major label outlet store

Halloween used to be my favorite holiday

but when everyone...

...everyday....

...dresses up to be a beautiful failure
or a horrific success

its taken all the fun from going door to door asking for the goodness that being a member of the human race brings with it


so instead i sit from my dilapidated wooden steps, watching through the torrent of water falling from a broken gutter

hands on my arms on my knees pulled up under my chin

wondering where my favorite holiday has run off too

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© 2009 whisperer
Published on Thursday, February 12, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • elisa On Thursday, February 12, 2009, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    '...dresses up to be a beautiful failure or a horrific success ...' holy shi'at this is brilliant. what more can i say...

  • A former member wrote: i know what you mean i think, but maybe we just get more cynical with age. was halloween or xmas so different b4 we were old enough to realise how commercialised they are. everything is rose-tinted as a kid -that's the beauty of it. I like the idea -that people 'dress up' every day - and i could picture it vividly. nice write.

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