I'm fucking starving...

By freudian-slip

What I wouldn't give
to lay my vision on poetry
sinfully
realistic

Regardless
whether or not
the origin of it
is driven from such exquisite pain
that I'm left alone
to feel nothing less
than Clockwork Orange eyes
staring at the abyss
or be entangled permanently in sadistic wit

a masochist
with permission to view
your passionate masterpiece

a literary disclosure of the most perverted kind
where I'm left
ripping the clothes from my skin
all in the name of
a voyeur's wet dream

but instead I'm left pounding my fist
against the keys

begging...

a desperate attempt to sustain the aching need

to feel

your words momentarily
complete me

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© 2009 freudian-slip
Published on Thursday, February 5, 2009.     Filed under: "Non-Fiction" and "Poetry"
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Comments on "I'm fucking starving..."

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  • palenoble On Friday, February 6, 2009, palenoble (47)By person wrote:

    I was starving. Thank you for feeding me. -noble_

  • Vicious Pixie On Friday, February 6, 2009, Vicious Pixie (62)By person wrote:

    holy shit, i immediately loved this. made me breathless

  • blue On Friday, February 6, 2009, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    Ah! I concur with Elisa.. starving indeed. ~b

  • blue On Friday, February 6, 2009, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    Loved the final lines!

  • elisa On Thursday, February 5, 2009, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    i love the intimacy you created here. excellent piece.

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