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Good morning....is it?
By Rebel tiGer King
Anger.
Subsequently it's translucent
to the eye of the beholder.
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itself as n O t H i N g N e S s on the rust of my eyes.
None the less i smile tonight.
Beating myself inside with a bag of your innocent mistakes.
Even unprovoked i fall with every breath.
One step closer to death i suppose.
In a way, only the sun can know what the moon really looks like first thing
in the morning.
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© 2009 Rebell tiGer King
Published on Monday, January 19, 2009.
Filed under: "Philosophical" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "Good morning....is it?"
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On Tuesday, December 29, 2009, Dilated View
(583)
wrote:
Very interesting that such a powerful emotion can be so overlooked when it's upon us. Really liked the last line. Cool read. :)
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On Wednesday, June 3, 2009, Riven Waker
(323) wrote:
i find this work to be exceedingly clever... very nicely done
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A former member wrote:
Astral write brother,..a smooth blend of universal earth,..hope this is more than a cameo appearance.
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On Tuesday, January 20, 2009, Narcissa
(404) wrote:
Agreed. So good to see you back! This feels like a promised whisper of a slow death...perfect even if it is painful.
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A former member wrote:
this is not for the weak of heart.. it's delicate yet painful at the same time..in a slowly but surely kind of way..
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On Tuesday, January 20, 2009, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
Heavy & Human. It is said that resistance is the reason for all suffering & a collective vice all humans share. You are very talented at displaying the way you feel with abstract texture. It seems in this piece like you have reached a BIFURCATION POINT perhaps I could share with you something I have discovered & I wish to share with anyone who is searching for truth. If you are interested DP mail me and I will be sure to let you know as much as I can about it. Take care ~matt
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On Tuesday, January 20, 2009, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
beats at the heart and soul in a way that is so painfully crushing... good to see your words although saddened at the shape of emotion they formed here... *hugs*
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A former member wrote:
That last line...damn. It's good to see your words here again, but I wish they weren't these... I think you know what I mean. Keep well and pop in more often, won't you?
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