just let me touch her

By SourInnocence

In the crowded room she stared at her, Her eyes screamed her desire.
She had touched her last night, in more ways than one.
She wanted to touch her now but she couldn’t reach her.
Even if she could the public would not approve.
They label love taboo if it’s different. And she wants to break every rule in the world to be able to touch her again. But with tables and ignorance between them she suffered the space of love. And all the while dreaming of the smooth lips that had tasted her own, and the hands that gently soothed each ache. Her heart said run to her, knock every table on its side and let them call it taboo. Just let me touch her.

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Copyright 2003 SourInnocence
Published on Tuesday, May 13, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • BrideToAgony On Sunday, December 9, 2012, BrideToAgony (13)By person wrote:

    I think you just summed up my first two years of high school in one fantastic piece of work. thank you

  • Ophelia On Friday, August 27, 2010, Ophelia (221)By person wrote:

    Sad longing that makes ones heart cry with pain to love and not be able to declare it to the world, nice

  • Sin On Sunday, December 18, 2005, Sin (1168)By person wrote:

    to deny the heart is a crime within itself...to hell with society and its prying eyes...i say love passionately whom ever you love and be happy in knowing that the rest lack your courage ~kristy

  • Malice In Wonderland On Wednesday, August 3, 2005, Malice In Wonderland (987)By person wrote:

    perfection... Scholar

  • Sticky Kitty On Wednesday, August 3, 2005, Sticky Kitty (242)By person wrote:

    beautiful i dnt know wut else to say -kitty

  • Angst Queen On Tuesday, July 5, 2005, Angst Queen (370)By person wrote:

    If I had room left on my faves this would go. This feeling sucks it really does. You did really well on this work

  • A former member wrote: hmm; a lady thing; or maybe a same sex thing? sorry i dont know, im not a lady....... or gay, for that matter. But hey, we ALL love rainbows, don't we?

  • A former member wrote: This is great..I'm sorry...I know many people like this....and it sucks...

  • asailorsangel On Saturday, June 28, 2003, asailorsangel (34)By person wrote:

    this is an awesome dictation of the wanting inside. You are correct love is taboo and gets lost in the he and she of it.....

  • A former member wrote: u know i should tell my friend to read this poem... whoo hoo great write

  • SourInnocence On Wednesday, May 14, 2003, SourInnocence (13)By person wrote:

    hey i am glad you enjoyed my poem because i worte it for all you who knows how that feels, i myself never experienced that...p.s. never had a g/f :)

  • blackdarkness On Tuesday, May 13, 2003, blackdarkness (228)By person wrote:

    i totaly suport you!! and you kitty!! love you guys....graet write

  • KittyStryker On Tuesday, May 13, 2003, KittyStryker (711)By person wrote:

    you are amazing. i've dated girls who aren't out... and it's awful. society tears us apart when what we want most is each other. i feel for you, darlin'...

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