Shun

By shadowsinthelight


Fusion,
Two becoming one

Rejection,
One staying one

Affection,
I am feeling for you

Connection,
Always missing me



Confession,
Revealing painfully

Intention,
Slowly leaving me

Derision,
From lips I have kissed

Confusion,
What have I missed


Illusion,
Part of reality

Revelation,
Rare moments of clarity

Solution,
Help me understand

Conclusion,
Take me by the hand


Fission,
One becoming two

Depression,
Me without you


©2002 by steve giacomini






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© 2008 shadowsinthelight
Published on Tuesday, November 25, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: i like this poem alot.theres alot of feeling in it.

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Wednesday, August 12, 2009, Spiritus_Frumenti (341)By person wrote:

    sweet piece...-l-

  • A former member wrote: awwwwww.....i don't know about every body else but....AWWWWWW this is sooooo sweet. The last line really nails it all together. I love this!

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Thursday, January 22, 2009, Spiritus_Frumenti (341)By person wrote:

    very nice flow, indeed. i felt like a back and forth emotion of strength and weakness throughout the piece...-l-

  • A former member wrote: Incredibly fluent, Excellent.

  • NikesRain On Tuesday, November 25, 2008, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    slips easily down through thoughts and pulls at memories until the softly painful ending... well done

  • Believer On Tuesday, November 25, 2008, Believer (48)By person wrote:

    indeed.

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