Erotodaze

By freudian-slip

The window shade was tilted up
as if to brag in public humiliation,

by her choice

she offered no reference to this love...
when asked in open
desperation

"what happened to you?"

"Did you notice too...
that you have to suck so much harder on a cigarette these days,
to get any relief?"

somehow he knew at that point he was headed into gone...


"don't look so sad just because I'm not the same", she spoke

and nothing made sense of her recent demise...


as she smiled

and smothered out the almost unlit cigarette, between her legs

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© 2008 the-rapist
Published on Tuesday, November 11, 2008.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: gasping for my breathe breathing harder till i drop to the floor

  • Sketso On Tuesday, November 11, 2008, Sketso (436)By person wrote:

    wow... "don't look so sad just because I'm not the same" - the line in the middle that defines the whole write, at least, to my reading eyes...

  • A former member wrote: egads..........................

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