Dance of a vampire
By Lylani
Stockings and stiletto dreams
dancing to the rhythm of the thunder storm
Free
Crazy
wild
Such a beautiful monster
with your serpentine curves
lips
slightly parted
sigh
she gasps and giggles
I surrender
To your beauty
To you
Such pale skin in the lightning flashes
She draws near
sweet
subtle
smile
on your scarlet lips
Raindrops frame you in a diamond aura
slender
seductive
goddess
strides toward me
desire fills your jet black eyes
come
now
baby
Let me hold you
Your cool embrace, our lips meet
desperate
urgent
passion
You amaze me
Your nails drag across my flesh, kissing my neck
scream
serenity
shattered
What...? Baby No...
Stabbing pain through every inch
As she makes love to my death
Moist
Blood
Red
She kisses me deeper
Deeper much deeper
The agony of her desire
Life
Fades
To black
Comments on "Dance of a vampire"
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A former member wrote:
WOW that was the best thing i have ever read it had such rhthym and it made me want to go on forever.i also thought it was very seductive
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On Wednesday, September 24, 2008, heroineyes
(113) wrote:
i really liked the flow and way this was broken up...very cool...
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On Tuesday, September 23, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus
(359) wrote:
oh dear "As she makes love to my death " haha is it sad this turned me on? :P well written
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On Tuesday, September 23, 2008, Rhys Ki
(68) wrote:
Ah, very nicely written. I love these sorts of dark works. A dangerous, seductive tone is the accomplished key here, and I like it.