My Goodbye...

By LiP Stiches

Remember the stillness
when snow like petals just...



Notice when the sun goes down
and your eyes just...



And how the world
slows down to just...



We will never forget those moments
when we were just...



And all I can think of
are the loving words of...



Why are you never here to
keep me...




This is my goodbye...

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© 2008 LiP Stiches
Published on Thursday, August 28, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • sixsixnine On Thursday, August 28, 2008, sixsixnine (477)By person wrote:

    every line more than finished and a calm and collected approach in the midst of alot of hurt. well done

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