Me at you

By elisa



the ache
of his unbroken flesh
within rosary's reach

begs the greed of my grip
to bleed his release





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Copyright 2008 elisa
Published on Tuesday, August 5, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Soldier Of Silence On Wednesday, August 25, 2010, Soldier Of Silence (42)By person wrote:

    ...yes please...

  • A former member wrote: Your poetry and your pictures are soooo very beautiful! I love all that you do.

  • Phalanx On Tuesday, November 3, 2009, Phalanx (677)By person wrote:

    What a beautifully wrapped box of hate. You certainly twisted my grin. Makes me want to watch something writhe and scream while it's burning.

  • Huey Lewis On Wednesday, May 13, 2009, Huey Lewis (22)By person wrote:

    this is pretty fuckin hot. dig.

  • Riven Waker On Friday, April 24, 2009, Riven Waker (323)By person wrote:

    reminds me of haiku - in this short space you used particularly potend phrasing for maximum impact - i am quite impressed

  • A former member wrote: yes...bleed him with the fire of your words and scratch psalms into his soul for good measure...this was hot.

  • The Lipstick Factor On Thursday, October 9, 2008, The Lipstick Factor (290)By person wrote:

    Sinfully erotic--lovely, lovely write.

  • sixsixnine On Thursday, August 21, 2008, sixsixnine (477)By person wrote:

    a very powerful emotion coming thru this piece. i sence that maybe there is a lack of or too much tantric need. very influencial I find it.

  • A former member wrote: Nice to see you're writing, sexilicious.

  • A former member wrote: For me, this seems to allow an ambiguity, perhaps... where the release that is begged is desired by him as if ecstasy, but the bleeding convinces me that you have other designs. Does his flesh being within rosary's reach suggest that he has something for which to repent?

  • elisa On Thursday, August 14, 2008, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    perhaps ..a passionate penance for the need of want. chaplets beaded claws carving a feast down his spine for her emaciated soul.

  • A former member wrote: "within rosary's reach"..that held high for me, a constant moving thought robed in anxious sweat.

  • elisa On Wednesday, August 6, 2008, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    ...lord knows i sweat exercising this demon...

  • carlosjackal On Tuesday, August 5, 2008, carlosjackal (3010)By person wrote:

    Mmmmm...This was deliciously horny and spoke to me of 2 people gagging to fuck each other's brains out. Lusty, unholy brilliance. Love it :)

  • elisa On Tuesday, August 5, 2008, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    lmao ....*pleads the fifth*

  • carlosjackal On Wednesday, August 6, 2008, carlosjackal (3010)By person wrote:

    Hehe :)

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