Seduce Me

By Circe Avalon

I don't want to tease a man into my bed
I want him to lure me into mine
To fall into the comfort of what I know and
tell me how wonderful it is to lay with me
To wrap his arms around my waist
and to laugh into my ear
to nuzzle against my neck and be content
and just smell the scent of my skin
with lips pressed against that flesh
to feel my blood and breath
for it to be the most soothing thing
ebb and pull of my body
the perfect lullaby
a melody, a song
he wishes to never have to pull away from
To live that moment forever

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© 2008 Circe Avalon
Published on Monday, August 4, 2008.     Filed under: "Fantasy" and "Poetry"
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  • Ashteroth On Sunday, December 28, 2008, Ashteroth (192)By person wrote:

    As a man just let me say, this piece does have a lot of appeal. Nicely written, covers the moment well forgetting only the comfort he would take in feeling the warmth of your body pressed against his own while he listens to your beating heart and lets his fingers graze gently across your gentle navel and down your thigh.

  • A former member wrote: i love moments like that.. very nice work

  • Narcissa On Tuesday, August 5, 2008, Narcissa (404)By person wrote:

    Yes...It is the gentle simple things that are seducing... even entrancing. beautiful piece.

  • Moonflower On Tuesday, August 5, 2008, Moonflower (301)By person wrote:

    hmm...beautiful.

  • heroineyes On Tuesday, August 5, 2008, heroineyes (113)By person wrote:

    i love the image it paints in my head...wonderful, beautiful.

  • NikesRain On Monday, August 4, 2008, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    loved the opening lines of this and the work as a whole... sultry yet there's a lightness to it that just leaves one smiling knowingly... outstanding

  • Circe Avalon On Friday, August 8, 2008, Circe Avalon (115)By person wrote:

    You know! So good to be understood!


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