love song, [our fucking]

By heroineyes

i'm tired of being an interlude,
the down-beat fill in an
arpeggio'ed a-minor chord;
resonant only in a
dark sky filled with a lone star.
only shimmering through
the exhale of cigarette smoke.
i know i grow weary-
minding the fact-
though heart still loves,
will break

i do a lot of thinking in life,
writing and singing through
and out of c chords, (don't forget the sixth)
resounding with their
own dimly light evenings.
cover your ear listener!
we'll exhale and ideas
will fall from our mouth shrieking,
like feedback from the distortion;
Her nails dug into my back
what a lovely cadence
we'll make.

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© 2008 heroineyes
Published on Saturday, August 2, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Cassette On Monday, December 18, 2017, Cassette (1144)By person wrote:

    I miss you and your writing... please come back

  • A former member wrote: Amazing....Loved it!

  • disposable On Wednesday, September 24, 2008, disposable (105)By person wrote:

    when i read your work i am so overwhelmed with your obvious intelligence! its definitely enjoybale to read but u really make room for ppl to see through and to YOU. write on...

  • Withering petals On Sunday, August 3, 2008, Withering petals (68)By person wrote:

    *nods head in acknowledgement* writing that puts you right in a moment and out of framework - awesome write ~Downstream~

  • The Lipstick Factor On Saturday, August 2, 2008, The Lipstick Factor (290)By person wrote:

    Lovely, lyrical work. Beautiful.

  • Mistress Shadow On Saturday, August 2, 2008, Mistress Shadow (252)By person wrote:

    Focusing on the music instead of the behaviour is a refreshing change.~T

  • A former member wrote: heartfelt. i enjoyed this. ~ hdb.

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