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Checkmate
By Scarrzz
Life is like a chess game
Against a sadistic genius
Every move has repercussions
That I don't see as traps
Methodically she takes away
Everything I hold dear
And leaves me in a position
That is unrecoverable
There comes a time in every game
When the ending looms apparent
Now I lose my Queen
I am well and truly forked
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© 2008 Scarrzz
Published on Thursday, June 26, 2008.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, August 13, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium
(275)
wrote:
What an interesting way to describe life.. A game of chess, you are fantastic. Great job :)
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A former member wrote:
Bout time you recognize that god is a woman... even if it's through a metaphor ;) She's hot, too, aint she?
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On Tuesday, November 10, 2009, Qurious
(40) wrote:
I love the comparison of life to a chess game - I've made that comparison often myself and I always find myself wondering why I seem to play the knight that always wants to help but can only move a few steps in each direction.
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On Friday, June 27, 2008, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
I like this alot. And I love how you claime life to be female.. Great write. Smart and poeticly shaped.
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A former member wrote:
Don't know anything about chess but, I don't need to know to understand this.
We are all pawns in each other's games. Most people don't even realize they are playing....
Good stuff, Schley. xoxo
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On Friday, June 27, 2008, snakeskingrin
(59) wrote:
I like chess so I enjoyed this...esspecially "well and truly forked" lol. Isn't it funny how women seem to know the moves about 4 steps ahead of us??? I'm just a pawn trying not to get captured and taken off the board..:)Snake
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A former member wrote:
interesting concept. i enjoyed this piece.
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