shots fired

By freudian-slip

lay it on me...

The critical masses,
who pass judgment like they wipe their own asses,
halfheartedly.

Must be a lunar influence,
where the sun is facing omnipotence,
while the shade is found only by those wearing rose colored glasses.

By the way...
some of us come from a very good place,
so before you load up on ammunition
we are all worthy
of some careful consideration.

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© 2008 the-rapist
Published on Monday, April 14, 2008.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: *carefully considers the implications of the implied judgment* I love the irony of the ass-wiping line... where I understand the invective to be judgmental... If only I had been privy to the shots that produced this ricochet

  • A former member wrote: I feel like I walked in on a conversation halfway through.....tip toeing backward veeery quietly.

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