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Only Ash Remains
By GraveFlower
when a man meets a force he cant destroy
he desroys himself instead
aching
knowledge of knowing he is being defeated
hurts worse than the defeat itself..
....
scum
cant grasp the fact
that you arent superior
you think your all high and mighty
your a bad ass?
labels wont fucking save you
or defect the fact that you are a worthless piece of shit
along with everyone and thing that has a pulse
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© 2008 silent circus
Published on Monday, March 24, 2008.
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On Sunday, June 30, 2019, zebra black
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wrote:
its just giving birth to humility It will pass and another test will come The test of endurance...Its a marathon a heartfelt write with some great insights
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On Monday, January 9, 2017, DarkAsh
(45) wrote:
5 years later and this one still feels like a brand on me. I sometimes think about this poem, the line about knowing you are defeated... I've thought about that line for 5 years now. It's relevance to my life is uncanny.
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On Monday, January 9, 2012, DarkAsh
(45) wrote:
I feel... described...
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On Saturday, November 13, 2010, ANGELSLAYER
(118) wrote:
I fucking love the contempt I feel radiating, as I share emotion with you
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A former member wrote:
true
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On Monday, March 24, 2008, Kaleidoscope_Heart
(111) wrote:
Lovely like venom. We are all parasitic in our own way. But yes, knowledge of defeat is more brutal than the defeat itself. So is ignorance bliss?
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A former member wrote:
We are all pieces of shit, but some smell better than others. Pride can only take us so far but eventually there will be a dead end street and no way to return. This is a good write! ~DC~
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