a brilliant day.

By i tremble

Today will be brilliant
if I can
remember
to tiptoe around
those few little thoughts

that race around
in my head
like toy cars
clumsily propelled
by children's fingers

and find a way to
subtly explain
my racing heartbeat
and my trembling fingertips.

The sky will be
a more vibrant mixture
of blues and greys
and the stars
will seem closer
than ever before.

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© 2008 jodeanna franks
Published on Thursday, March 20, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Narcissa On Thursday, March 20, 2008, Narcissa (404)By person wrote:

    Now that would be a brillant day! wonderful piece.

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