Air of the Beast

By freudian-slip

Lost in poetic blissful distraction,
keyboard tapping-

my friend the white russian
sitting beside me,
faithfully.

as does he

His name is Noah.
mixed breed of shepherd and rot,
loyal protector and confidante
who anyone would swear,

wears a smile-

as he releases a noxious smog that would permeate the paint.

Good God

I'm

going

to

faint.

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© 2008 the-rapist
Published on Sunday, March 9, 2008.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I like it :) it's short and to the point. I've noticed many people use their own style of writing, instead of following what every poet does. And I like the end xD funny xD

  • freudian-slip On Sunday, March 9, 2008, freudian-slip (239)By person wrote:

    *paint still dripping* you should see the smile on Noah's face :o)

  • Syringe On Sunday, March 9, 2008, Syringe (51)By person wrote:

    i like the 6th line. it makes me smile

  • Niemand On Sunday, March 9, 2008, Niemand (361)By person wrote:

    Haha

  • freudian-slip On Sunday, March 9, 2008, freudian-slip (239)By person wrote:

    Na- if I'm so damn genius, how come I can't make a child smart enough not to feed the dog MEXICAN FUCKING PIZZA??? *rolling in fart air and laughter*

  • denver nitze On Sunday, March 9, 2008, denver nitze (256)By person wrote:

    LMAO!! in caps none the less. i so know this feeling. kinda makes you want to put them out of your misery huh? whatever you do don't lite a cigarette, you might blow the place up. this was great. you are a genius. *cheers* ~tNa

  • A former member wrote: this was excellent. I loved it. ~ hdb.

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