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T & A
By freudian-slip
I'm far better,
less worse in fact-
than the next tits and ass that has come across your screen.
Screaming-
PAY ATTENTION TO ME
I am important,
in fact I have the bruises and the attitude to support it.
And if you haven't already noticed,
I'm also equipped with a voice.
Perfectly seductive enough to relay my latest heartbreak,
or skin filled escapade.
If scented words came across your screen,
I'd be amber and musk-
scented fragments of moments I'd never discuss,
unless it was worded perfectly.
I'm poetry,
and make no mistake,
I need your response to alleviate my present state-
some form of redemption,
so please pay attention,
to me.
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© 2008 the-rapist
Published on Wednesday, February 27, 2008.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "T & A"
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On Saturday, March 1, 2008, Narcissa
(404)
wrote:
Thank you...For this write...Its perfect in so many ways.
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On Thursday, February 28, 2008, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
Always dig the ride on your train of thought.
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A former member wrote:
I woudn't mind a few responses myself. THis was sharp and together. nice write. -END
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, Syringe
(51) wrote:
you made yourself known through your words, and not you body. this write reminds me of some of the girls on myspace with the 'mirror' pictures. with their lips pursed and belly hanging out. why is it necessary, honestly? this write captures that message to me perfectly.
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, freudian-slip
(239) wrote:
always loved amber... smells like LUUUUUUUUUV. lol
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, denver nitze
(256) wrote:
:) it is very true though. i think it has to do with the media and the way women are portrayed. 'she with the breasts shall inherit success'!!! (had to quote that one, i'm keepin it) ;) anyhow, very nice write, i keep sniffin my computer for that smell...*sniffs*
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, freudian-slip
(239) wrote:
I think it's more in general. WE women in general are conditioned, so to speak, to appeal to the masses with all our assets.
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, freudian-slip
(239) wrote:
no, tarnished angel, not you.
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, denver nitze
(256) wrote:
t&a? coincidence? i hope. i try not to reveal too much... ;)
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A former member wrote:
This is so sarcastic... I love sarcasm. Poetry indeed.
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, freudian-slip
(239) wrote:
I saw a pic with a girl (nameless) who revealed way too much and thought...What the fuck? you don't need that here.
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A former member wrote:
well, let's not rush to judgment... um... where might this pic be?
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, Nixx
(240) wrote:
i like this. i really like this a lot :)
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, freudian-slip
(239) wrote:
it's not about me, let make that clear:) lol
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, past tense
(16) wrote:
beg. this is like the corner beggers slicing tires for change. the voice is strong.
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