...pure and dying...

By Spiritus_Frumenti

My love is the saddest love,
It is a mournful yearning
A hopeless passion
A patience so quiet and profound

My love is the saddest love,
It is an endless feeling
Unimaginably desolate
Empty with everything-
everything that I long for in this world

My love is the saddest love,
It is filled with tragedy and desire
A faith that makes me weep for hours
For something so pure-
something so pure and dying…

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© 2008 Spiritus_Frumenti
Published on Wednesday, February 27, 2008.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: dying, pure and innocent up until the last breathe, what happens then?~moony

  • Miztaken4beauty On Monday, August 23, 2010, Miztaken4beauty (177)By person wrote:

    Beautiful, yet sad.

  • urbanhumility On Wednesday, June 4, 2008, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    in all the prose you have written......i see now, clearly...what i have felt at a respectful distance.....you have gathered such a magnitude of intropection in so very few but beautiful words.......you are truly beautiful my friend......urban

  • A former member wrote: gorgeous to read of you again. ...classic as always and breathless to boot...ness

  • freudian-slip On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, freudian-slip (239)By person wrote:

    OH THANK YOU. sometimes I just read for the one that hits. nice smack in the face, and well written.

  • past tense On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, past tense (16)By person wrote:

    the purity you yearn for isn't dead. it just likes to play hide and seek, and not let you in on the game.

  • Fantecstasy On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, Fantecstasy (122)By person wrote:

    And you reached inside my head and pulled out how I felt today. Excellent work. *tips hat*

  • A former member wrote: I heart it!

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