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Paper Gown Suicide
By freudian-slip
Every attempt made,
to eliminate all possible means,
to a self imposed end.
However-
he will prove them all wrong,
and curse the spirit sucking world,
for which he has known.
He will overcome all obstacles.
He will transcend.
Senseless-
to all those who care,
or display feigned sensitivity,
with their overcast stare.
Transparent empathy,
is far more destructive than anyone ever imagined.
Creative,
gum wrapper-like,
intertwined creation...
sets the lethal foundation.
It's the last imposition he will ever place upon his loved ones.
Despite his incarceration-
never again,
will anyone doubt his savvy determination.
Hanging from the ceiling,
like a cheap Christmas tree decoration.
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© 2008 the-rapist
Comments on "Paper Gown Suicide"
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On Friday, April 11, 2008, colorapathy
(50)
wrote:
the ending of this was very interesting and abrupt, rather strong. I like that part the best. I wandered just a little bit in the begining, but it pulled me back in firmly for that last bit.
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A former member wrote:
I adored the last two lines. This was a very abrupt and had such a true-life feel to it. Very well done. Thank you for sharing.
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A former member wrote:
I love this one, its really good. Thank you for the comment.
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On Saturday, February 23, 2008, freudian-slip
(239) wrote:
in my thoughts he created the gum wrapper like twist, with his paper gown. I suppose a bit more sunlight and some human contact this weekend would help. lol
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A former member wrote:
not sure I followed this one close enough, but I got the idea he's hung himself in jail; but I'm not sure I understand the paper gown or the rage. I like the concluding image a lot though. Oh Okay... the gum wrappers were the means. OOP. Lil slow on the uptake there, sorry. I like the prop about empathy in the middle, too. A very opaque narrative and an intriguing event at that!
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On Saturday, February 23, 2008, RubyXero
(484) wrote:
hmmm...oh yes. i loved the whole, "spirit sucking world"... how very true.
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On Saturday, February 23, 2008, freudian-slip
(239) wrote:
tnx
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On Friday, February 22, 2008, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
p.e.r.f.e.c.t..... for lack of better words, here is some shameless flattery.
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