Cheshire

By liquid_emotion

She exudes confidence
That appeals to every eye
Lingers a little too long
And although short
She is the perfect height in heels
That creates a muscular line
Down shapely thighs smooth
Like her laughter that vibrates
Walls cannot contain it
Catches on and lifts faces
In her direction as she leaves
Everyone in a dream that lingers
Only as a vibrant smile

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Copyright 2003 liquid_emotion
Published on Thursday, May 1, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I quite enjoyed this, I love the way the title ties. :) good stuff!

  • GreekPhilosopher On Saturday, July 19, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (156)By person wrote:

    I'm Sure Everyone Has Someone In Their Life As Such... In One Form Or Another. Bag Of Goodies. GPhD.

  • hate_doll On Sunday, June 8, 2003, hate_doll (265)By person wrote:

    As everyone else has stated...sexy piece and amazing eyes...

  • manywalks On Sunday, May 25, 2003, manywalks (750)By person wrote:

    Tight, and simply beautiful. ~ mw

  • A former member wrote: this reminds me of Pure Bliss. Thats the same kind of luminescant wonder that is always emitted from who I wrote it about(you know who). breathtaking. :)

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Monday, May 5, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (1703)By person wrote:

    This does successfully create a portait in my mind - felt like I was looking at the scene in lieu of reading about it. Oh, in case I didn't say so in my other three comments - BEAUTIFUL EYES! : ) Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • liquid_emotion On Monday, May 5, 2003, liquid_emotion (323)By person wrote:

    You are so lovely... thank you

  • Bloodofdeadpoets On Sunday, May 4, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets (55)By person wrote:

    very nice piece,and you do have some beautiful eyes, thanks for sharing both with us

  • Six-Out On Friday, May 2, 2003, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    Hmm. me likes. Very descriptive indeed. And yes, you do have nice eyes. Sorry, I would write more, but it's friday, what can you expect?

  • DoctorAsh On Friday, May 2, 2003, DoctorAsh (373)By person wrote:

    hehe, "keep writing", no actually ... you should quit while your ahead ...

  • liquid_emotion On Friday, May 2, 2003, liquid_emotion (323)By person wrote:

    jack ass! :)

  • FallenSky On Friday, May 2, 2003, FallenSky (42)By person wrote:

    yes, this does have a sultry way about it, good work ...keep writing ~CFS

  • liquid_emotion On Thursday, May 1, 2003, liquid_emotion (323)By person wrote:

    you guys are so damn sweet!! thank you... I havent gotten comment like this since I was little, but I was ALL eyes then:) it means a lot though, really.

  • cre On Thursday, May 1, 2003, cre (411)By person wrote:

    That is sooo sexy. And I agree with Justin - lovely peepers you've got.

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