Soulfreeze

By liquid_emotion

I wanna tell a story but I don’t know how cuz I’m trapped inside this flowing hell
That ebbs and breaks and weaves my words instructing thoughts to do its work
The freedom inside restricts when it leaves and I’m left stuck in their binding weave
Someday I’ll break and cut the flow and chop this ever incessant roll
I’ll restrict the emotion that stops short of whole and halt my always liquid soul

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Copyright 2003 liquid_emotion
Published on Thursday, May 1, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • maddin foxxxy On Tuesday, June 24, 2003, maddin foxxxy (358)By person wrote:

    "and halt my always liquid soul "...powerful, descriptive line...very well done!

  • A former member wrote: I like the way this works with the title, I really don't think it would be the same without it, which did you write first? well, I was just wondering. :) I liked it, I am even tempted ot play with your words to see what happens, but I will refrain

  • A former member wrote: Wow. I feel like I want to rap this over a nice little beat or something. This flowed as smooth as your liquid soul. :)

  • Bloodofdeadpoets On Sunday, May 4, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets (55)By person wrote:

    very nice its like an adrenaline rush that comes to abrupt end, thanks for sharing

  • cre On Thursday, May 1, 2003, cre (411)By person wrote:

    Ohh, I like this! It would be great on your profile. It's so tumbly frantic and all trapped inside itself at the same time. Wonderful.

  • liquid_emotion On Thursday, May 1, 2003, liquid_emotion (323)By person wrote:

    hey it would be good on my profile!!! thanks:)

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