into oblivion co write with Narcissa

By Rebel tiGer King

The death of a season
claimed the life of another year.
The seconds bleeding through the calendar, its days suffocating the intentions of the earth.
She fought hard.
But you cant battle time.
Its a cancer that eats
all of us.
engraving all of us
with cruel and cracked lines
crippling us with illness and age, waking the sin in our bones, sketching the beating of our heart to the marrow in our bones
As the hands of time constricts,
her final moments decayed the flight of yesterdays allure and birthed the dawn of tomorrows melancholy.
A moat of onyx tears
flowed through the valley
...and the world rejoiced

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© 2008 Rebell tiGer King
Published on Tuesday, January 29, 2008.     Filed under: "Reflective" and
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  • A former member wrote: lovely co-write you two..:) i love this...

  • A former member wrote: flawless...you both shine in this one!

  • A former member wrote: i really liked this...

  • A former member wrote: two of my fav poets on dp writing a colab together. well done. ~ hdb

  • SGT Bloth On Tuesday, January 29, 2008, SGT Bloth (165)By person wrote:

    Great stuff you guys...great stuff

  • Narcissa On Tuesday, January 29, 2008, Narcissa (404)By person wrote:

    I love it - thanks again Mr King :)

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