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FORSAKEN
By SGT Bloth
WHERE ARE YOU!!!!!!!!
WHY DON"T YOU ANSWER!!!!!!!
I am the one who has been FORSAKEN!!!!!
You have closed your eyes to me
Though I reached out to you
I turn my back now
I will handle this on my own
Walking deeper into the fire of torment
I cease all prayer
I thought you existed
I thought you cared
How could you make me bare all of this?
I am human
I am not strong
It is so heavy
this feels so wrong
I turn my back now
You will never see my tears
The lashes on my chest
have been there for years
All the times I cried out
LORD TAKE THIS OFF OF ME!!!
Fallen
on
deaf
ears
So I turn my back now
If you are even there
I walk to the darkness
I will look for solace there
There must be relief
from all my shame
I must have comfort
I must have pain
WHY HAVE YOU FORSAKEN ME!!!!!
I cry out in tears
like your son did
remember?
that day on the cross?
I remember
The stories they told me
They all believe
as I believed
so long ago
So I turn my back now
so you can not see my shame
and walk deeper into the fire
and bear my own pain
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On Thursday, February 14, 2008, Chimauron
(87)
wrote:
I know the feeling only too well. Try to remember one thing, though: He will help you when you truly need it. God (or whatever you choose to call your deity of choice) doesn't answer all prayers because He wants us to help ourselves when we can. Find strength in that, and only ask for help when you really need it. But be thankful always. That's how I see it anyway. Nice write, man. :)
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On Friday, February 8, 2008, Syringe
(51) wrote:
woow i love the first two lines. i think those 2 sentences have been said out of every human being. u where ur emotions on ur sleeve that's why i love ur work
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On Sunday, January 27, 2008, darkestburningstar
(1) wrote:
i love this......you were right
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On Sunday, January 27, 2008, SGT Bloth
(163) wrote:
See...you understand...that's why you are one of my favorites..I bet you'd love my older stuff as well
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On Sunday, January 27, 2008, elisa
(1616) wrote:
my preferred method of coping with being forsaken...well said.
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On Sunday, January 27, 2008, SGT Bloth
(163) wrote:
Thanks Elisa...you're also one of my favorites...your words are as beautiful as you
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A former member wrote:
I love this. There is so much pain in this piece. The emotions are raw and in your face. I felt the agony described in your lines. Very, very good writing.
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On Sunday, January 27, 2008, SGT Bloth
(163) wrote:
Thank you, very much. I have been in alot of pain on this subject for a long time. I guess it just had to come out.
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