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mood: alone
By cre
music in the background
dreams run down my face
dying and I'm breaking
this is not the place
not the place I thought it was
now I sigh alone
in the arms of no one
and I don't know
I just don't know
there should be more
but the dark will overwhelm me
and I will slide to the floor
and cradle my own head
in the arms of no one
in tears alone
and I don't know
I just don't know anymore
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Copyright 2003 cre
Published on Wednesday, April 30, 2003.
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A former member wrote:
aloniness is all i want and choose to feel... nice poetry
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On Sunday, June 1, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(511)
wrote:
The utter loneliness and awkward lost feeling that accompanies it, gleamed through like a dull heart beat in a mass grave. I could have fallen right into this and off my chair. ~DW~
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On Saturday, May 17, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
You successfully captured the feeling of hopelessness we all feel at times...when the reality sets in that, despite the facade, we are truely alone. Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful, i enjoyed this much!
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A former member wrote:
A wonderful piece which allows me to get in touch with how I feel now as well. So dark and so brilliant! Great piece, you!
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On Friday, May 2, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets
(55) wrote:
you describe the feeling of being alone so well in this poem, it was so dark and sad and wonderful to read, thanks for sharing
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On Thursday, May 1, 2003, Jonas
(720) wrote:
breaking, like the sound of glass, shattered and muffled...
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On Thursday, May 1, 2003, Armand
(57) wrote:
"dreams run down my face" - oh man... i LOVE this line... it says it all so eloquently succinctly. if you werent so popular, i might be inclined to steal it. great piece.
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On Wednesday, April 30, 2003, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
Wow, jane, just wow. It left me with a feeling of helplessness knowing that one of my good friends is in this situation. I hope it gets better.
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On Wednesday, April 30, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
rocking and tragic and it's like I felt the racking sobs you didn't even disclose with words. Tired, and I just don't know anymore.
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On Wednesday, April 30, 2003, DoctorAsh
(373) wrote:
ahh ... this is more like it .. lets go stab eachother with dull forks .... nice write cre,
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