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Milk Carton Unicorn
By Zahgurim
With crystal grace
Love embraced
These rare entities
True in existance
Pure innocense
Drinking from the falls and streams
It's no dream
The red bull came
The red bull went
Stole what is real
Without any consent
Drove beauty deep
Deep into the sea
The sea of lost light
Where they could never be
Or even reunite
Gather all wizards
Gather all fairies
Gather all your paper
It gets quite scary
Without their guiding light
We are afraid of the dark
We can't shed enough tears
With our never ending fears
Open up your ears
The red bull came
The red bull went
Stole what is real
Without any consent
Drove beauty deep
Deep into the sea
The sea of lost light
Where they could never be
Or even reunite
Fight
Fight with your right
To protect your creation
For their salvation
Kill
Kill that bastard
That fucking bull
Don't let the sea get full
Charish
Charish the lost
Forget them never
Remember forever
And ever.
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Copyright 2003 John Michael Joseph Barnes
Published on Tuesday, April 29, 2003.
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Comments on "Milk Carton Unicorn"
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A former member wrote:
wow......I'm kinda speechless.
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On Monday, November 15, 2004, Liz
(267)
wrote:
I agree, enchanting is a good word for this. I liked the repetion, but the vulgarity taints it a little. Can't you say it differently? Hate can be beautiful, it really can.
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On Monday, November 13, 2017, Cassette
(1144) wrote:
I kinda agree with you, here... the vulgarity is a bit off-putting for something that starts so majestically.
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A former member wrote:
Ooh, it's so beautiful.. Can't get enough of it.. ~Wish Upon A Star
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On Monday, November 10, 2003, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
a wellspring of enlightened fortitude......lyricly unique........well done.......urban
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On Friday, September 19, 2003, Raze Drake
(85) wrote:
Nicely written. We are to do what we want to.
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On Tuesday, June 10, 2003, angel_eyes
(10) wrote:
very magical...the unicorn is awesome
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On Saturday, May 17, 2003, cre
(411) wrote:
I love this ... especially after tonight's chat and knowing more of the meaning... wonderful write.
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On Saturday, May 17, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
Wow...you just summed up the whole story behind those who hang here. Fight for the now but remember you past...lovely. ~DW~
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A former member wrote:
Reminds me of the Last Unicorn..the movie...this is great..I love the straight foward..wake the fuck up feel of the end..
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A former member wrote:
Aye, that is what it reminded me of... It's a great write.
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