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Heart on the Table
By SilentStalker
Grab a steak knife from the table
Gonna show you how you did me
wrong
Cut as firmly as I'm able
Please be patient
love, it won't be long
Since you left my heart in tatters
Make it last just so I hear you cry
Taking yours
is all that matters
What a fitting way to say good-bye...
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© 2007 SilentStalker
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On Thursday, March 19, 2015, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703)
wrote:
Yum Yum!
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On Wednesday, November 28, 2012, PoetessDarkly
(700) wrote:
awesome imagery. Love the dark theme. It's what we all think about but are afraid to go through with. lovely pen
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On Tuesday, December 20, 2011, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
Damn! Yeah you fit right in with us... In a sense... lol.. Wow!!
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On Friday, July 23, 2010, Riven Waker
(323) wrote:
the remnants of love - how very bleak - brilliant
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On Wednesday, December 16, 2009, Dilated View
(583) wrote:
Powerful. Feels like an even trade :)
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On Monday, June 9, 2008, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
You seem to take it out better then I can, your rage sizzles hotly and boils to the deepest cores of the earth.. Hurt, it burns me so badly every time I read this.
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On Wednesday, April 23, 2008, Mari
(425) wrote:
this makes me sad
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On Saturday, February 23, 2008, zanewill
(84) wrote:
great ballad
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A former member wrote:
I love the format. It looks like action, then the thoughts behind it. It reminds of Stephen King somehow. And he is probably my all-time favorite author. This is powerful, intense and direct.
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A former member wrote:
wonderfully wicked!
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A former member wrote:
i fuckin love this, and i have missed reading your work. awesomeness ~Shell~
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On Monday, December 17, 2007, elisa
(1616) wrote:
cold.. decisive. the systematic severing of a heart. ........ a passionate murder ...with surgical precision. ...so exact... it felt bloodless. the axe man lives. nicely done.
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On Monday, December 17, 2007, Aunty Depressant
(434) wrote:
Gripping, cutting edge!
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On Sunday, December 16, 2007, Niemand
(361) wrote:
Dude... I love it. Short, but perfect.-Airi
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On Sunday, December 16, 2007, veingo
(532) wrote:
Now this is the kind of little ditty that could be stuck in my head for a while. ^V^
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On Sunday, December 16, 2007, mysterylove
(99) wrote:
short yet perfect. i always have loved your work.=)
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